Monday, April 13, 2009

my twenty line poem :)

my cat
was eating a rat
after that
it slept on a mat

and i sat
wearing a hat
saw tendulkar bat
while i pat my cat

then i got bored
nearby, an engine roared
in the sky an eagle soared
and the rain poured

i love the rain
it does something to my brain
eases me of all pain
i dunno if i am sane or insane

then the rain stopped
nearby a frog hopped
my happiness topped
but the floor got wet and i mopped

12 comments:

  1. Nice poem for a first-timer. When are we getting the second one?

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  2. ohh myy... the writer sure knows how to pen down feelings. Amazing stuff... touched the heart. M feeling I just rediscovered myself. Eyeopener. Too good. Tears welling up in eyes. (sniff)

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  3. I'd like to know the sudden motivation!!!!

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  4. it has always been on my bucket list :)

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  5. i don't like rhyme. best words come without rhyme.
    but yes, it is a start. keep going.

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  6. sahi hai!!

    pata chal raha hai 10 din ghar pe rhi hai and max vella maara hai!! :P

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  7. Great work babezzzzz!! m damn sure ur gonna rock the world of poetry...bachpan se hi aapki kalaakaari pe poora vishvaas tha humein....

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  8. It was so like Mailieeeeeeee......... Uchhaal diya tune yahan bhi.. cute hai kaafi vaise :)
    Good good.. keep it up..

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