my cat
was eating a rat
after that
it slept on a mat
and i sat
wearing a hat
saw tendulkar bat
while i pat my cat
then i got bored
nearby, an engine roared
in the sky an eagle soared
and the rain poured
i love the rain
it does something to my brain
eases me of all pain
i dunno if i am sane or insane
then the rain stopped
nearby a frog hopped
my happiness topped
but the floor got wet and i mopped
Nice poem for a first-timer. When are we getting the second one?
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ReplyDeleteohh myy... the writer sure knows how to pen down feelings. Amazing stuff... touched the heart. M feeling I just rediscovered myself. Eyeopener. Too good. Tears welling up in eyes. (sniff)
ReplyDeleteI'd like to know the sudden motivation!!!!
ReplyDeleteit has always been on my bucket list :)
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ReplyDelete:)...nice one.....
ReplyDelete:) cute one i must say
ReplyDeletei don't like rhyme. best words come without rhyme.
ReplyDeletebut yes, it is a start. keep going.
sahi hai!!
ReplyDeletepata chal raha hai 10 din ghar pe rhi hai and max vella maara hai!! :P
Great work babezzzzz!! m damn sure ur gonna rock the world of poetry...bachpan se hi aapki kalaakaari pe poora vishvaas tha humein....
ReplyDeleteIt was so like Mailieeeeeeee......... Uchhaal diya tune yahan bhi.. cute hai kaafi vaise :)
ReplyDeleteGood good.. keep it up..